Why o why
does the world discrimenate
why does it have hate
why does it hate
why do we have rasicist slurs
why do we use them
do we like to cause pain and hurt
why do people think there funny
why o why
does no one stand up and say
stop it
why o why
does the world discrimenate
Great job. I really liked your use of repitition, and I think that it made the poem very strong. It also clearly related to the social issue of racism, and although I personally wouldn't have said it so explicitly, I think that it worked for you. Great job.
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